foxxcub: (sawyer by princesslucky)
aleesha ([personal profile] foxxcub) wrote2007-01-31 03:10 pm
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A Moment in Black and White (G)

OMG VINCENT!FIC WTF

Title: A Moment in Black and White
Rating: G
Pairing: slight Jack/Sawyer

For the [livejournal.com profile] lostsquee Lost Riffs prompt: an event on the island as seen by any non-human being


He learns quickly that it’s all about sound. Or the lack there of.

When the two of them yell at each other in sharp, rough-edged tones, he stretches out on the sand and waits, because it’s the anger even he can recognize won’t last. It never does.

The noise dies down. They back away from each other slowly, breaking apart altogether as one walks off into the jungle while the other stays on the beach.

Now, Vincent knows, the coast is clear.

“Seems like you always know when I just got a scoldin’,” the man says to him as Vincent butts his head up under the man’s arm. He smiles, and Vincent knows enough about people to know when smiles are false.

He licks the man’s chin--It’s okay. Because Vincent also knows the man is never alone for long; his other half always returns.

[identity profile] isis2015.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww. That's adorable. Man, even the dog sees it between them. That was wonderful and sweet. I just love it.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! And of course Vincent is a closet shipper. ;)

[identity profile] halfdutch.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww! Vincent comforting Sawyer. *loves* He remembers those oysters! I love that Vincent has more faith in their relationship than they do.

Don't have my Sawyer & Vincent icon anymore so this'll have to do.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Trust the dog to know the humans better than they know themselves. ;)

[identity profile] fosfomifira.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. Vincent is such a good dog! Good pets always know when to comfort the humans around them, especially when said humans are being silly for no good reason.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
He *is* a good dog, a good dog who loves slash, LOL.

[identity profile] ambiguousreason.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
This is adorable. Vincent may be one of my favorite characters on the island, hee.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I miss Vincent. :(

[identity profile] hkath.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Nawwwww! Vincent is such a shameless shipper ;)

*love*

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
HE IS. ♥

[identity profile] gemjam.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, this is just so sweet. I love Jack and Sawyer having this combative relationship, but I love that, even though Jack always walks away, he also always returns. And that Vincent is there to comfort Sawyer and wait with him, that is just too cute.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Vincent is very good at holding Jack's place. ;)

[identity profile] demonqueen666.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, even Vincent sees the subtext! I love the last line, how they're referred to as halves of the same whole.

[identity profile] demonqueen666.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, and, um, you might want to check your email again. Cus...yeah, you know. *shifty eyes*

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Got it, read it, commented. :D

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Yay for animals and their subtext sensors!

[identity profile] elise-509.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww...

and Awwwwwwww...

That was so damn adorable. Yay for Vincent. :)

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
I love that practically every comment to this starts with "awwww", LOL.

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[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you muchly! :)

[identity profile] zelda-zee.livejournal.com 2007-01-31 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Love this! I love that Vincent recognizes that Jack is Sawyer's "other half".

I miss Vincent. His screentime has been curtailed worse than Charlie's this season.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
I know, I miss Vincent! *smites writers*

Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] ladynutmeg.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
AWWW. Such huge hearts for this. And dogs always know *nodsnods*

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Vincents sort of owns all, doesn't he? ;)

[identity profile] inthekeyofd.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 12:50 am (UTC)(link)
See, even Vincent sees it!

And loves Sawyer too!

And comforts him!!

You know that animals know the good guys, they do!!

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it, hon. ;)

[identity profile] thespiansparkle.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
AWWW Vincent!!!!

I'm so happy you wrote this. The moment non-human prompt was mentioned, I was secretly longing for a sweet Vincent fic and now I got one. :)

And dogs DO know these things! They're so intuitive. And I love the image of Sawyer softening up for him--showing that sweeter side. Plus the idea of even Vincent knowing that they're two halves of the same soul. Adorable, sweet, and fun. Great job!

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
It was literally the first thing that popped into my head when I read that prompt, LOL. I mean, what else is a dog gonna do on an island besides watch two guys spin circles around each other?

[identity profile] gottalovev.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
awww that's the cutest thing ever!

the image is just adorable! thanks! let's bring Vincent back!

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 04:23 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, thank you! :D

[identity profile] cmonkatiekatie.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
The only thing I like better than the title is the whole damn thing. This is adorable. And I'm crazy if I say the dog is in character, right? Well, he is.

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I'd hate think I would write an OoC version of Vincent, LOL.

*thinks you're cute and snuggles*

[identity profile] uhzoomzip.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
i was waiting for a vincent fic, and this so hit the mark! vincent and sawyer had such good chemistry; i remember sawyer sharing fruit with him.

too cute!

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 04:25 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

[identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
Sawyer is such a dog guy, even if he is in the closet about it, and there's nothing can make you forget your worldly troubles quicker than a doggie slurp! I love that Vincent knows the arguments really amount to nothing, yet he waits to comfort Sawyer anyway. Well played, and well received!

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! Vincent is such a smart dog, which I'm sure is one of the big island mysteries--he secretly knows how to get them home, LOL.

[identity profile] patch-tank.livejournal.com 2007-02-01 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, so cute! He's such a good dog to take care of Sawyer like that *snuggles Vincent and Sawyer*. Well done!

-Patch

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-02 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks a bunch! :)
siluria: (Lost_Sawyer cheers)

[personal profile] siluria 2007-02-04 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwww, that's so cute! I need a dog...

[identity profile] foxxcub.livejournal.com 2007-02-04 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Not just a dog, a Vincent!