I feel like I'm constantly reading this story while half covering my eyes--I'm constantly waiting for one of them to screw it up by doing or saying the wrong thing---the entire story is written on this very fine tightrope edge of 'almost'...they are almost together, they could almost be together, and they are also almost about to screw it up...the tension is so visceral, and I feel like it could tip either way and it's KILLING ME! I want them to confess everything and be together already!!!

Someone up there ^^ said it best though that the prolonged agony is giving Arthur time to realize the type of person Eames is--which is a kind of amazing person...I just want to tell eames to stop being insecure and just keep being amazing, and eventually arthur will come around!

In short, this story is amazing and I love it, and I want more and I almost don't want more and WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!!!??